I’ve been reworking Alone so far I’m through chapter 7. And since now I actually know what happens in my story I’ve been removing needless junk, but I’ve added quite a bit more information to hopefully illustrate a bit of the motivations for some of the characters. I don’t really know if I should change what I’ve put up online. The first few chapters really didn’t have a ton of changes. Chapter 7 though I’ve added a bunch of new dialogue.
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